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 \opening{Ms.~Laura Hoff,}
 
-Over my years working on my Ph.D. studies at Drexel University, I have
-been looking forward to teaching physics at a small,
-undergraduate-oriented liberal arts college.  While working at a
-larger research-oriented institution has been exciting, I have always
-been attracted to teaching.  I look forward to working at a school
-such as St. Martin's which clearly has a strong commitment to teaching
-excellence and teacher training.  Besides teaching physics, I am also
-interested in advancing the science of teaching as well as in
-developing open source experiment control procedures.  Over the past
-year I have been active in the
+Thank you for reviewing my application for the position of Assistant
+Professor of Physics at Saint Martin's University.  Over my years
+working on my Ph.D. studies at Drexel University, I have been looking
+forward to teaching physics at a small, undergraduate-oriented liberal
+arts college.  While working at a larger research-oriented institution
+has been exciting, I have always been attracted to teaching.  I look
+forward to working at a school such as St. Martin's which clearly has
+a strong commitment to teaching excellence and teacher training.
+Besides teaching physics, I am also interested in advancing the
+science of teaching as well as in developing open source experiment
+control procedures.  Over the past year I have been active in the
 \href{http://software-carpentry.org/}{Software Carpentry}
 organization, which trains scientists around the world in current
 software development and data management techniques.  Software