From dbac7ad7230bf8e912840b7b7da6de9e13796f38 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "W. Trevor King" Date: Thu, 30 May 2013 16:36:39 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] loi.tex: Back away from assuming they've hired me ;) Look forward to it, instead of being excited by it. Reword the end of the paragraph to avoid too much looking forward ;). --- loi.tex | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/loi.tex b/loi.tex index 516f406..4aa3f4d 100644 --- a/loi.tex +++ b/loi.tex @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Over my years working on my Ph.D. studies at Drexel University, I have been looking forward to teaching physics at a small, undergraduate-oriented liberal arts college. While working at a larger research-oriented institution has been exciting, I have always -been attracted to teaching. I'm excited to be working at a school +been attracted to teaching. I look forward to working at a school such as St. Martin's which clearly has a strong commitment to teaching excellence and teacher training. Besides teaching physics, I am also interested in advancing the science of teaching as well as in @@ -58,8 +58,7 @@ Carpentry \href{http://software-carpentry.org/bootcamps/2013-02-uwash.html}{recently} \href{http://software-carpentry.org/blog/2013/03/washington-went-well.html}{ran} a boot boot camp at the University of Washington, and I look forward -to working with my SWC colleagues to continue this outreach in the -Puget Sound area. +to continuing this outreach in the Puget Sound area. I am also looking forward to working at a religious school. While I myself am agnostic, I enjoyed the traditions of my -- 2.26.2