From: W. Trevor King <wking@tremily.us>
Date: Thu, 30 May 2013 20:36:39 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: loi.tex: Back away from assuming they've hired me ;)
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loi.tex: Back away from assuming they've hired me ;)

Look forward to it, instead of being excited by it.  Reword the end of
the paragraph to avoid too much looking forward ;).
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diff --git a/loi.tex b/loi.tex
index 516f406..4aa3f4d 100644
--- a/loi.tex
+++ b/loi.tex
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Over my years working on my Ph.D. studies at Drexel University, I have
 been looking forward to teaching physics at a small,
 undergraduate-oriented liberal arts college.  While working at a
 larger research-oriented institution has been exciting, I have always
-been attracted to teaching.  I'm excited to be working at a school
+been attracted to teaching.  I look forward to working at a school
 such as St. Martin's which clearly has a strong commitment to teaching
 excellence and teacher training.  Besides teaching physics, I am also
 interested in advancing the science of teaching as well as in
@@ -58,8 +58,7 @@ Carpentry
 \href{http://software-carpentry.org/bootcamps/2013-02-uwash.html}{recently}
 \href{http://software-carpentry.org/blog/2013/03/washington-went-well.html}{ran}
 a boot boot camp at the University of Washington, and I look forward
-to working with my SWC colleagues to continue this outreach in the
-Puget Sound area.
+to continuing this outreach in the Puget Sound area.
 
 I am also looking forward to working at a religious school.  While I
 myself am agnostic, I enjoyed the traditions of my