From: W. Trevor King <wking@tremily.us>
Date: Mon, 27 May 2013 11:02:26 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: root.bib: Rephrase note for dietz04
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root.bib: Rephrase note for dietz04

Mom thought that the 'towards' language in the middle of the sentence
was unclear.
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diff --git a/src/root.bib b/src/root.bib
index 43f0766..28199be 100644
--- a/src/root.bib
+++ b/src/root.bib
@@ -2600,9 +2600,9 @@
         the barrel. Quantitative analysis of force distributions and
         lifetimes lead to a detailed picture of the complex mechanical
         unfolding pathway through a rough energy landscape.",
-    note = "Nice energy-landscape-to-one-dimension compression graphic.
-        Unfolding Green Flourescent Protein (GFP) towards using it as an
-        embedded force probe.",
+    note = "Towards use of Green Flourescent Protein (GFP) as an
+        embedded force probe.  Nice energy-landscape-to-one-dimension
+        compression graphic.",
     project = "Energy landscape roughness"
 }