From: Carl Worth <cworth@cworth.org>
Date: Sat, 23 Jan 2010 06:00:25 +0000 (+1300)
Subject: README: Tighten up the text a bit.
X-Git-Tag: 0.1~139
X-Git-Url: http://git.tremily.us/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=184625ac9b4a336bafc94bd7409ae176917d5050;p=notmuch.git

README: Tighten up the text a bit.

As Keith pointed out, (with a humorous citation from Mark Twain),
the two uses of "very" added nothing to the description. Also,
"large collection of email" was repeated uselessly.
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diff --git a/README b/README
index e47dd420..2c570e1d 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -2,8 +2,7 @@ Notmuch - thread-based email index, search and tagging.
 
 Notmuch is a system for indexing, searching, reading, and tagging
 large collections of email messages. It uses the Xapian library to
-provide fast, full-text search of very large collection of email with
-a very convenient search syntax.
+provide fast, full-text search with a convenient search syntax.
 
 Notmuch is free software, released under the GNU General Public
 License version 3 (or later).