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 <p>Do you administer servers, and wish you could re-key them without
 sowing massive pain and confusion among your users (or worse,
 encouraging bad security habits among them)?  Do you wish you could
-identify the users to grant access by name, instead of by opaque
-string?  Do you wish you could rapidly grant or revoke access to a
-user across a group of machines by enabling or disabling
-authentication for that user?</p>
+grant access to your users by name, instead of by opaque string?  Do
+you wish you could rapidly revoke access to a user (or compromised
+key) across a group of machines by disabling authentication for that
+user?</p>
 
 <p>A group of us have been working on a public key infrastructure for
 SSH. <a href="http://monkeysphere.info">Monkeysphere</a> makes use of