pyafm/conclusions.tex: No floundering ;)

Thanks Em!

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@@ -7,9 +7,8 @@ experience designing or managing moderately large software projects.
 Coming into this project, I already had several years of experience
 working with LabVIEW, but I had very little experience in other
 languages and no formal training in project maintenance.  I spent the
-first two years of my research project floundering about until I
-acquired enough experience to start making progress on a sustainable
-stack\footnote{%
+first two years of my research project acquiring enough experience to
+start making progress on a sustainable stack\footnote{%
   Since last summer I've been helping the
   \href{http://software-carpentry.org/}{Software Carpentry}
   project\citep{wilson06b} reach out to scientists (mostly graduate