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-The Monkeysphere project's goal is to extend the web of trust model
-and other features of OpenPGP to other areas of the Internet to help
-us securely identify each other while we work online.
-
-Specifically, monkeysphere is a framework to leverage the OpenPGP web
-of trust for OpenSSH authentication.  In other words, it allows you to
-use your OpenPGP keys when using secure shell to both identify
-yourself and the servers you administer or connect to.  OpenPGP keys
-are tracked via GnuPG, and managed in the `known_hosts` and
-`authorized_keys` files used by OpenSSH for connection authentication.
+The Monkeysphere project's goal is to extend OpenPGP's web of trust to
+many areas of the Internet to help us securely identify each other
+while we work online.
+
+Specifically, monkeysphere currently offers a framework to leverage
+the OpenPGP web of trust for OpenSSH authentication.
+
+In other words, it allows you to use your OpenPGP keys when using
+secure shell to both identify yourself and the servers you administer
+or connect to.  OpenPGP keys are tracked via GnuPG, and managed in the
+`known_hosts` and `authorized_keys` files used by OpenSSH for
+connection authentication.
 
 ## Conceptual overview ##